Poetic Analysis And The Great Gatsby

A writing assignment taken a little too artfully.

Kat Knight
2 min readMay 22, 2020
Taken from Wikimedia Commons

The Ash valley is depicted in “The Hollow Men” by T.S. Eliot,

The watching eyes gaze upon the judged

The hard-working fall into darkness

Those who inhabit these lands of Ash and Darkness can not escape.

— — The parallels of the wolds are incredible.

The eyes of the on-looking can hurt

Those who do not fall, despite moral in both stories, are not punished.

Tom commits atrocities and does not fall.

Jordan lies and does not fall.

— — She drifts through a garden waiting for a day when the Truth will come to her.

— — Waiting for her fine clothes to degrade,

— — her refined life to blow away in the wind.

— — — — To let the Truth come out into the open.

Nick does not fall.

— — He is bored by his life

— — People do not understand his opinions

— — he has heard theirs his entire life,

— — — — he has no “Inner Resources”, he is waiting for his Truth.

— — — — But,

There are some who are punished

Daisy is in Shadows, punished for her faithfulness

— — Her “Lips that would kiss/ Form prayers to broken stone.”

Her losses can’t be cut

She has nowhere else to go but,

to the Shadows. To Gatsby.

George B. Wilson drives, unknowingly, into a trench.

Punished for surviving.

His wife won’t wait.

He is The Hollowed Man

— — The Stuffed Man

Pushed around and used.

“Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!” He cannot see his destination of betrail.

He has not yet woken up in

the Shadows.

— — — His world will end in a whisper.

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Kat Knight

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